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I present to you, the translations of the Japanese dialogue in Part 1 of MoonRunes.
All dialogue will be in order (left to right and top down) with the character speaking it labelled. 

MoonRunes Part 01 by HaruBells

NOTE: I will not translate when the only thing the character says is ルナ, since that's the main character's name, Luna (although with kana, pronounced "Runa." It's a pun. Luna means moon. Runa sounds a bit like "rune.")

The Japanese dialogue starts on panel 7 (aka page 2 of the four pages that make up part 1, but that's not important)
Oak: ルナ、まって! - "Luna, wait!"
Oak, Panel 8 - ルナちゃん、それはきけんあだ。おれのラッブへ行って。きみにポケモンをあげる。 -"Luna-chan, that's dangerous. Come to my lab. I'll give you a Pokemon."
Oak, Panel 9 - かわいそう。。。 - "Poor thing..."
Blue, Panel 11 - るな。。。おかえりなさい。 - "Luna...Welcome home."
Oak, Panel 12 - どうぞ。 - "Here." (Luna: "Boon!") Oak: いいえ。。。すみません。 - "No...I'm sorry."
Oak, Panel 13 - ブーンは。。。 - "Boon is..."
Crispy, Panel 16 - はじめまして、よろしくね! - "Nice to meet you!" 
Crispy, Panel 22 - あなたが好きですね。 - "I like you." (I wanted him to say "You're weird. I like you." but for some unknown reason, I didn't. Darn you, past Haru)
Crispy, Panel 23 - ごめんえ。あなたはルナ、ね?あの名前はきれいね。 - "Sorry. You're Luna, right? That name is pretty, huh."
--Luna: "Stop it."
--Crispy: ボクはクリスピ、ね?あの名前が好きだね。 - "I'm Crispy, right? I like that name."
Crispy, Panel 25 - やったね! - "Hooray!"
--ボクはルナさnにおしえましょうね - "I'll teach Luna-san." (basically, he means he's going to teach her "Japanese")

Final Panel: The Team (clockwise from Crispy)
Crispy: ボクの名前はクリスピ!とてもすてきね! - "My name is Crispy! It's very lovely!"
Feather: おはようございます。 - "Good morning"
Hama: ハジメマス。 - "Nice to meet you."
Spinnel: よろしくピ - "Best regards pi"
Bow: ンボウ?ンはい。 - "nn Bow? Nnyeah."

The point of the final panel is to show off not only the team themselves, but also their manner of speech.
--Crispy: He speaks very casually, and ends most sentences in "ne" Essentially, most of his sentences are searching for agreement (for example, とてもすてきね!would be "It's very lovely, huh!") He also uses the male pronoun ボク (boku) for "I." He speaks casually in the sense that most verbs are left in dictionary form (not conjugated to the -masu form, which is a polite form). This is because he is comfortable with Luna. Fun fact: He's also quite young.
--Feather: Feather speaks politely. I couldn't think of a good way to display that with a greeting, but she does. Hence why she says the full "Ohayougozaimasu" rather than just "Ohayou"
--Hama: All of Hama's dialogue is in katakana. I wanted at least one team member to have katakana dialogue and she seemed like the best option for it. 
--Spinnel: Spinnel speaks semi-casually (hence "yoroshiku" instead of the full "hajimemashite, yoroshiku" or "yoroshiku onegaishimasu." She also ends all of her sentences in "pi." She is a Pikachu, after all.
--Bow: Bow speak in short bursts, beginning each thought with a thoughtfull "Nn." Mostly because it's hard to speak properly with those massive chompers in the way ;)

Crispy is a cutie baby and I love him.
MoonRunes Part 01 by HaruBells
MoonRunes Part 01
Phew. I feel like there's a lot that gets covered on this page but at the same time not. It's almost entirely setting up Luna and her motivation. 
I'll type up a journal entry translating the Japanese text, and a journal entry explaining a few things (like why the other characters can clearly understand Luna, but she can't understand them, etc.) It's just too much to type up in the description lol

I'll add the link in the navigation here once I type it up. :)

Translations: harubells.deviantart.com/journ…
Gallery: harubells.deviantart.com/galle…
Cover: harubells.deviantart.com/art/M…
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Dear Mom has gathered a lot more attention than I thought it would, so it's gotten to a point where I decided it would be in my best interest to play a little farther ahead so that I can better plan things out. As such, I don't think I will update at all this week. I might toss a few bonus arts up here to hold you guys over until next Monday, but no major updates. Not only am I playing ahead (I want to at least get out of Rocky Tunnel in-game before next Monday), I will also start working on having a buffer of pages so that I won't be pushed so far behind schedule again. You guys are all so awesome, and I absolutely want to give you the best quality that I can. Which means building up a buffer of at least three parts. 
I know you guys understand though, cuz yer all awesome
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So I was playing my AlphaSapphire nuzlocke (Follow me on Twitter for that!) and somehow an idea occured to me..

Okay, so, if you've been following me for a while, you might remember Shira's SoulSilver Nuzlocke, a little intentionally-bad nuzlocke comic I did a while back where I tried so very hard not to become attatched to anything, but gave up on it after Pigwidgeon, my Noctowl (and starter; I was playing with a rule that forbade me from using the starter from Elm), died against Chuck. (I...don't do well with losing my starter ;u;)
Shira's SS Nuzlocke was intentionally bad (it was drawn on lined paper, and entirely in pen. But people actually kind of liked it a little?) because it was a side-project to my main nuzlocke (at the time), Seven's LeafGreen Nuzlocke. Which is on indefinite hiatus because I became so intensely bored and hated the story that I had started to write. 

But I like the idea of having a side-comic. 
Here's why: 
-It will be intentionally bad quality (for humour purposes), so it will take a lot less effort than Dear Mom
-Since it will take less effort, the side comic can update with more frequency
-Since it will update with more frequency, it can help fill out days that I'm not submitting Dear Mom, or if I'm running late with Dear Mom.
-Since it's a side project, it won't have a set update schedule. This means I don't have to stress about getting a page out/not getting a page out on time.
-It will be mostly comedy driven with just the stupidest story ever.

So, I'm announcing a new side-nuzlocke...
MoonRunes - A Pokemon LeafGreen Nuzlocke (Wow, I really like nuzlocking Kanto lololol)

Here's what you need to know about MoonRunes
-It's a nuzlocke of LeafGreen
- c:
- c:
- c:
- OuO


It will be coming...soon. Whenever I feel like drawing the first page. 




(If you know what "Moon-runes" are in the context of the internet, then you know the basic premise of the story eue)
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I present to you, the translations of the Japanese dialogue in Part 1 of MoonRunes.
All dialogue will be in order (left to right and top down) with the character speaking it labelled. 

MoonRunes Part 01 by HaruBells

NOTE: I will not translate when the only thing the character says is ルナ, since that's the main character's name, Luna (although with kana, pronounced "Runa." It's a pun. Luna means moon. Runa sounds a bit like "rune.")

The Japanese dialogue starts on panel 7 (aka page 2 of the four pages that make up part 1, but that's not important)
Oak: ルナ、まって! - "Luna, wait!"
Oak, Panel 8 - ルナちゃん、それはきけんあだ。おれのラッブへ行って。きみにポケモンをあげる。 -"Luna-chan, that's dangerous. Come to my lab. I'll give you a Pokemon."
Oak, Panel 9 - かわいそう。。。 - "Poor thing..."
Blue, Panel 11 - るな。。。おかえりなさい。 - "Luna...Welcome home."
Oak, Panel 12 - どうぞ。 - "Here." (Luna: "Boon!") Oak: いいえ。。。すみません。 - "No...I'm sorry."
Oak, Panel 13 - ブーンは。。。 - "Boon is..."
Crispy, Panel 16 - はじめまして、よろしくね! - "Nice to meet you!" 
Crispy, Panel 22 - あなたが好きですね。 - "I like you." (I wanted him to say "You're weird. I like you." but for some unknown reason, I didn't. Darn you, past Haru)
Crispy, Panel 23 - ごめんえ。あなたはルナ、ね?あの名前はきれいね。 - "Sorry. You're Luna, right? That name is pretty, huh."
--Luna: "Stop it."
--Crispy: ボクはクリスピ、ね?あの名前が好きだね。 - "I'm Crispy, right? I like that name."
Crispy, Panel 25 - やったね! - "Hooray!"
--ボクはルナさnにおしえましょうね - "I'll teach Luna-san." (basically, he means he's going to teach her "Japanese")

Final Panel: The Team (clockwise from Crispy)
Crispy: ボクの名前はクリスピ!とてもすてきね! - "My name is Crispy! It's very lovely!"
Feather: おはようございます。 - "Good morning"
Hama: ハジメマス。 - "Nice to meet you."
Spinnel: よろしくピ - "Best regards pi"
Bow: ンボウ?ンはい。 - "nn Bow? Nnyeah."

The point of the final panel is to show off not only the team themselves, but also their manner of speech.
--Crispy: He speaks very casually, and ends most sentences in "ne" Essentially, most of his sentences are searching for agreement (for example, とてもすてきね!would be "It's very lovely, huh!") He also uses the male pronoun ボク (boku) for "I." He speaks casually in the sense that most verbs are left in dictionary form (not conjugated to the -masu form, which is a polite form). This is because he is comfortable with Luna. Fun fact: He's also quite young.
--Feather: Feather speaks politely. I couldn't think of a good way to display that with a greeting, but she does. Hence why she says the full "Ohayougozaimasu" rather than just "Ohayou"
--Hama: All of Hama's dialogue is in katakana. I wanted at least one team member to have katakana dialogue and she seemed like the best option for it. 
--Spinnel: Spinnel speaks semi-casually (hence "yoroshiku" instead of the full "hajimemashite, yoroshiku" or "yoroshiku onegaishimasu." She also ends all of her sentences in "pi." She is a Pikachu, after all.
--Bow: Bow speak in short bursts, beginning each thought with a thoughtfull "Nn." Mostly because it's hard to speak properly with those massive chompers in the way ;)

Crispy is a cutie baby and I love him.

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I love Alice in Wonderland, and the Harry Potter books/movies, and my favorite television shows are How I Met Your Mother, Adventure Time, House MD, and Fringe. My favorite videogames are RPG based games, like Zelda, Mario, Okami, and Pokemon. However, I do like fighting games like Teken and Super Smash Bros.

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Jenniej92 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks so much for the fave :D
means a lot <3
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HaruBells Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Of course!
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CHlLDREN Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Digital Artist
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ccucco Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the +watch!! Ahhhh I saw your comic on the forums! I love it so much~~
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HaruBells Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I can't not watch your comic!
I'm following it on the forums, too, of course. It's just easier to see when there's an update when I'm on here hahaha
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ccucco Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
fair enough, the forums are tough to monitor all the time lmao
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HaruBells Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Much more fun to comment there, though, since you can respond to everything in one comment haha!
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AgathaJoy Featured By Owner May 29, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks so much for watching!! :iconletmehugyouplz:

Ohhhhhhhhhhh my word your yellow nuzlocke is so cute I'll have to watch you back~
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HaruBells Featured By Owner May 29, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, no problem! :D And thank you! Good luck with your comic! Definitely looking forward to more. Adorable Osha is adorable!
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Jubalii Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I for one am nonplussed that there has been no updates. But.... I also know you've been drawing your bum off for your classes, so I forgive you.

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